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It Was A Beautiful Sunset A Poem  

yesmamallthetime 56F  
4465 posts
9/15/2019 8:57 pm
It Was A Beautiful Sunset A Poem


He said it was a beautiful sunset
But he was not seeing it with me
He was seeing it with another woman
So why was he mentioning it?
As a taunt? To needle my self esteem?
Or just to mention a natural phenomenon?
I know I was reading too much into it.
As is my wont.

But how could I not?
I wanted to be the woman
Who was by his side.
I wanted to be the woman
He was newly finished
Making love with
Who was<b> sleeping </font></b>nearby.
I wanted to be the woman
Who was with him
At that moment
Who awoke precisely
To his words
"It's a beautiful sunset."
Instead I was miles away
And reading a text
While another woman slept
Off his lovemaking prowess.

I am done.
As you can imagine.
I can't beat myself up
With his cavalier treatment
Of women who serve their
Momentary purpose.
I could be among them
I would be no better
Or no worse
Just one of them.
And it would hurt.
For I would want more.
And he would move on
To someone who has something
I don't possess.
Whatever that is
There is a long list.

And while the head was engaged
And while the heart was primed
And while the sex could have been great.
There would have been something
Absent on his end.
A sense of loyalty and devotion
That I don't know he could
Ever show anyone.
Yes, I am talking about love.
He told me he could not be
My forever love once.
When he said that
I should have
Walked away.
No, make that run.

The statement "It's a beautiful sunset."
Something I should walk off into
And not back
Thank you for the symbolism.
I still wish for a kiss goodbye.

Independently Romantic Sounds Better Than Lonely


yesmamallthetime 56F  
11278 posts
9/15/2019 8:59 pm

This goes along with my last poem...

Independently Romantic Sounds Better Than Lonely


Uncutlover42 47M

9/15/2019 9:13 pm

Very cool


yesmamallthetime 56F  
11278 posts
9/15/2019 9:31 pm

Thank you for reading and commenting. I appreciate that you think it is cool.

Independently Romantic Sounds Better Than Lonely


Livin_my_Life14 53F

9/15/2019 10:18 pm

Perhaps he just couldn’t love 2 people at the same time- I’m done too💕


dogslife2live01 71M

9/15/2019 11:46 pm

it was a beautiful sunset
and your want was for him

it is a beautiful sunset
and your id is yours again

it is a beautiful sunrise
and you are ready to start again

this reply was written in time lapse feelings


there is a world of difference between insanity and stupidity


b0nus0001 36M/30F
6 posts
9/15/2019 11:52 pm






scoupe42 60M

9/16/2019 3:37 am

What an amazing poem! You are one hell of a poet!


citizen4722 66M  
74582 posts
9/16/2019 4:04 pm

You have to walk before you run.
You did try and stay the distance.
It's wrong to make you feel glum.
He was leading you a merry dance.


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