If You Would Like To Leave Me A Personal Message
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Posted:Oct 10, 2015 4:05 pm
Last Updated:Aug 27, 2020 11:35 pm 249397 Views
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"It's Personal."
If you have something you would like to tell or ask me, why not post a comment here? This thread is set for me to review comments before they appear. They're just between you and me. Well I might read them out loud and they could be overheard by my pets.
I would love if you would comment on my blog posts of course. But if you just want to leave a quick message about any and everything, please feel free...
I recommend everyone have a blog so that others can contact them.
Have a great day!
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Explaining My Poetry Style
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Posted:Mar 14, 2018 9:39 pm
Last Updated:Apr 2, 2020 7:05 am 132978 Views
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Critical Poetry Thoughts
Someone criticized my poetry, He said he could not understand it He said that it did not make sense He said that it is kind of juvenile As I make it like a conversation.
Oh really well let me tell you what I really think! I don't really know why I write poetry this way. I just began and it is hard to change.
This person suggested I need to add description That I had to add visuals That I had to describe the senses That I had to let people feel for themselves And not tell them only how I feel.
But like a zebra If I were to be covered in white paint Eventually the stripes would reappear As the paint would fade.
Nature has many an animal that has spots Supposedly they cannot change them Should I count myself in their kingdom? But I have many more facets as I am a human.
Oh then there is that lizard Made famous by Boy George and Culture Club, Come on and sing it! I know you want to!
quot;Karma, Karma, Karma, Karma, Chameleon". Its skin changes with its surroundings. Oh were I that adaptable! Perhaps some day I will be.
But now that I have vented, Now that my pot has gone from boiling to simmering, I will just tell myself in a soft whisper. It is all good. It is actually constructive criticism. It is just an added piece of wisdom To which I can pick at as I please.
I may one day write a poem with just imagery. I may one day write a poem that does not voice, the way I speak, I may one day write a poem that does not rhyme at all. Who would I be then? Would I still be me? Oh seriously, I am not that dense I am just going through the motions Until this poem ends.
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Hello Everyone!
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Posted:Jan 7, 2021 10:35 am
Last Updated:Apr 15, 2021 8:34 pm 5262 Views
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I apologize for my lengthy absence from blogging. Frankly was a combination of factors. But the main thing I guess is that I was lagging in spirit. Healthwise I am doing okay. I have been spared getting infected by Covid 19 although I have had nieces and nephews contracted . Luckily they were all young and healthy and had a few days of sickness. My heart breaks for those have lost loved ones this insidious virus. I wear a mask and socially distance as recommended by doctors. I will be vaccinated when becomes available my group in my state.
I am not going suffer fools do not believe in science. The U.S. could have done so much better if people did a simple thing and wore masks from the get go. One man's vanity led folks astray. If you don't know I am referring then you might be one of his sycophants.
are some of my thoughts. Not very sexy eh?
I hope 2021 is full of change for the better. I wish my fellow AdultFriendFinder members health and happiness.
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Adequate Phrases. A Poem
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Posted:Nov 6, 2020 1:50 am
Last Updated:Apr 15, 2021 8:31 pm 8012 Views
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You amaze daily. Your smile is the start Are there adequate phrases describe the effect you have? Perhaps or perhaps not. I will try in any case My attempt impart What happens How it spreads from my head my heart.
It's a feeling Yes it is warmth That builds What processes? What chemicals? Should that be exclamation points As well as question marks? For they are remarkable!
The jury is out On when and if I announce Or call This feeling love For once that verdict Is divulged It could be picked apart. I have hope That once said It will be appreciated It's return in kind The ultimate response.
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The End Product A Poem
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Posted:Oct 20, 2020 7:28 pm
Last Updated:Jan 7, 2021 10:36 am 9004 Views
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What is in my heart? What is in my head? Words fail to come To do their bidding. I fail in my attempts For description.
A former lover Now just a friend. He is moving on I feel somewhat bereft. But did I not know This would be happening? For it happened before When he broke up With me the first time Then we got together again The ubiquitous term Friends with benefit Summing up our relationship.
There is caring there But not enough love For him to want me For more than An occasional liaison. does that hurt To know I do not Measure up to his ideal. Who am I kidding? If I were someone else I would similarly see myself.
He did give me hints About what I needed What I was missing In his list of must have traits But sadly I could not change And bring about their appearance. I am stuck in my ways And circumstances. I can barely navigate point A Without falling on my . Never mind attempt The trek to point B And what that will bring.
He knows well the devil Of bad habits He beat one of the worst So while he has sympathy He also knows it can be done. If someone is motivated.
So all my failings I could not fix them in a year I am stuck Like a stick in the mud. Or a sword in a rock Looking for that shining knight With the magic touch. Would that I was Dorothy In the Wizard of Oz And come to the conclusion With the help of others That what I really needed Was within me all along. I just needed to believe it And tap my heels. And tell myself There is more to me Than what I previously thought.
If it were all a dream And I wake up With a second chance Would I have the wherewithal? Would I magically see solutions To long enduring problems?
I think he saw the futility And all the wishful thinking on my part Might have been a down payment But I was never going to be able To the end product.
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The Luxury of Monotony A Poem
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Posted:Oct 12, 2020 7:31 pm
Last Updated:Oct 14, 2020 6:41 pm 9548 Views
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Time has passed. We have gone on with our lives. Doing this and that. Actions and thoughts Being taken and done Some with care Others with none.
Monotony day in and out Things getting Including myself. Dare I hope for change? But not too jarring a jump Not to a harsh reality. Just one that promises A more stimulating result.
Blah blah blah. Some would call those words The height of selfishness When others have experienced So much pain. They have not the luxury Of things staying the same.
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Finger Feathering Touch. A Poem
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Posted:Sep 30, 2020 7:02 pm
Last Updated:Jan 7, 2021 10:37 am 10504 Views
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If I were to touch you How would you react? Would you let me continue To make contact?
I would start with Your hand Then your wrist Moving up your arm Wondering if you Were affected And how?
If you were wearing shorts My hand would go Naturally to your knee Then above and below. Gliding along No particular destination Just feeling Your hair and skin And your warmth.
What would you be thinking? In that glorious mind of yours? Would you be wanting To feel me too? Or would you be content With my gentle exploration? Would you react at all Would it be stimulating? Would you tingle And your hair stand up? As attention was paid To various areas?
Would this finger feathering touch Lead to some other body parts Taking up the torch? Would lips and mouth Be forced To enlist in this touching scenario? You know when nature takes its course It seems inevitable. But it comes down to wants And being consensual.
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Your Hugs. A Poem
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Posted:Sep 30, 2020 9:34 am
Last Updated:Oct 12, 2020 7:13 pm 10405 Views
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I want shout Security! But only myself. That is the feeling That comes over me When you are around.
Your hugs encompass me Or should I say engulf? What is that chemical That humans produce When a hug is introduced?
Should I make you aware Of the effect you have? Perhaps you know What a hug brings How it is inherently Just the thing Human beings crave And need.
In that case My dear I would place My order For many more Please deliver them Into my waiting arms. Let not a day pass Without one.
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Added Sensations. A Poem
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Posted:Sep 2, 2020 10:24 pm
Last Updated:Sep 29, 2020 6:36 pm 11725 Views
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I know his voice well I hear it in my mind At times it arouses me Other times it has the Opposite effect Of making me calm.
I hear it in his normal sound. I hear it too When he mimics folks. Talks with an accent of Someone from Maine Or English With a deep deep voice
His way of saying Hi Or hey you Accompanied by An unconscious laugh Reach inside me Like a hook And I am caught. As I envision his smile That is magnificent.
What is more sensational When thought? Sounds or sights Smells or touch. I should just be thankful I have the ability And memories at all. And wish for more Added sensations.
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Best Forgotten. A Poem
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Posted:Sep 2, 2020 10:05 pm
Last Updated:Apr 23, 2021 6:28 am 11756 Views
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When we see each other again And you ask me if I am Seeing other men What answer would Make you happy? None, one, two Or half a dozen? If I asked you The same question One would cause me pain. You see she would be Experiencing that TLC That I wished Had never ended.
I wish I was enough for you. That I had something You found unique And you couldn't do without. Instead I was like a passing fad Good for a while But the end was inevitable.
So telling you I was celibate Or seeing multiple guys Who had different skills And equipment. All as a fucking distraction It probably would never happen For we live far enough away That seeing each other again Would be one heck of a coincidence.
Moot points That matter not Some things are best forgotten If they are lost.
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Hard To Contemplate. A Poem
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Posted:Sep 1, 2020 12:25 am
Last Updated:Sep 2, 2020 9:30 pm 11828 Views
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Sleepless once again Thoughts not wanting to end Worries aplenty No solutions forthcoming.
There are so many things That could drive us away Then apart would be The next step we'd take. I see this And it causes me So much pain. I catch my breath And nearly hyperventilate.
You think I exaggerate? Am being overly dramatic? Listen to my thoughts And give me your take.
The differences are unsustainable. It's crazy to keep holding on Yes we are both lonely And kind hearted people But we are fooling ourselves That we can have a future That gives us what we really want.
For me that would be someone Who can love me alone. Not look for the bodies of others To satisfy an urge.
For him he seemingly wants His hand held Someone as a companion Who supports his extracurricular pursuits.
His past girlfriends agreed To this arrangement So is my hesitation Just me being selfish? What about my wishes And my comfort?
Filling the present void Of each other's loneliness Will create future unhappiness. As our different desires Seek fulfillment.
I love being his friend And companion But he can't give me The romantic part Of a coupling equation.
Which leads me back To why I can't sleep I am too weak To make a break. Courage eludes me. The solution is staring Me in the face. But to take action Is hard to contemplate.
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Don't Think Me A Sap. A Poem
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Posted:Aug 28, 2020 5:50 pm
Last Updated:Nov 6, 2020 12:59 am 11904 Views
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Don't think me a sap As my only way to be You would be so very wrong. Very wrong indeed.
I can be hard As the hardest wood tree. Eucalyptus may be Versatile As well as hemp But I have about me A sturdiness That keeps me Well grounded.
I can give of myself But I want to live Don't cut me down Unless you are prepared To deal with The consequences. The end of our Nurturing connection.
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Come Back To Me. A Poem
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Posted:Aug 28, 2020 8:04 am
Last Updated:Sep 30, 2020 9:20 am 12020 Views
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Come back to me Its a line from a movie If you guess right You win a prize Just a smile But it could be like Winning the lottery.
How might that be? Us romantic souls Would see In the other A kindred spirit One who wishes And possibly prays For a love that can Last an eternity.
Yes an eureka moment Not be missed And hopefully not upset By a random penny. But alas reality Finds a way To rear its ugly head.
Making the phrase Come back to me Needing to be Once again said.
If only finding a penny Took on a new meaning Of knowing that love lost Can be found again.
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